Read Campie Primary School Short Stories Page 3


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  “HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAA!” Zane had unleashed the fury of his ninja fighting style on Dave. This fight had gone on long enough for Zane to realise that Paul didn’t actually want to be his friend or anything he actually set him up. The Prankstar had actually been pranked.

  “ZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANE!” screamed Sandy. “What are you doing!” she said .

  “I have to ……..”.

  “Have to what”

  “........Win the battle” he said.

  “AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH”. Crash Bang Wallop.

  “Zaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeeeeeee”Shouted Sandy.

  ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….The next day Zane got to school early.

  “Zannnnnnnnneeeeeeeee!!!!” came shouts from the school.And that was Zanes greatest prank yet

  Wanted for a Mystery Crime

  Christopher Bennett

  Tom was a very intelligent nine year old boy and he was the youngest person ever to go to university. Because of that he didn’t have any friends and because he had no friends he never had a sense of humour.

  One day Tom was walking to the library and stopped to tie his lace when a strange looking van pulled up beside him. The door of the van opened and a clown stepped out! “Excuse me little boy is you’re name Tom Lilboy?”

  “Yes” said Tom,

  “Well would you do the honour of stepping in the back of this fine van?” Exclaimed the clown

  “Why?” Tom asked.

  “I will tell you on the way because we are in a rush,” replied the clown. So Tom jumped in the strange looking van and off they went.

  “So why and where are we going?” Tom asked once again.

  “Well I am Sargent inspector Coco clown and I work for the laughter police and you have committed a very serious crime, so I’m taking you to Laughter H.Q for a very seriously funny talk! Ha ha ha!” Coco laughed

  ‘’Ok,’’ said Tom in a very strange sounding voice.

  They arrived at Laughter H.Q and they were greeted by two more clowns they all went into the big building when they got in there was two different areas the two clowns that met them had now left them two go and do some clown work! They went into the first area which had lots of computers in it Coco told Tom to sit down, when Tom sat down it made a funny noise! “Pardon me” said Tom

  “Oh that wasn’t you it was my whoopee cushion it was meant to make you laugh!”

  “What does laugh mean?” Tom asked

  “Well it’s a sound you make if find something funny!”

  “See that camera on top of that screen well I want you to look at it for a moment”

  “OK” replied Tom.... SQURT! The camera soaked him with water!

  “You are meant to laugh now” said Coco “like this HA HA HA! Now follow me to the next area!”

  In the next area there was lots of different toys clowns would play with! And there was also a seat with Tom written on it.

  “Sit down Coco said and this time there is no pranks!” Standing in the middle were the two clowns witch met them earlier Tom sat down and the two clowns started dancing around.

  Tom started to laugh for the first time in his life he had laughed the work the clowns had done had paid off!

  The clowns said their goodbyes to Tom and off he went home. WOW that was interesting!!! After his day with the clown’s he was never alone again!

  Haunted House

  Emily Brown

  It was a cold, misty winter’s night and it was the night before Halloween. A girl called Lucy was just putting the finishing touches onto her Halloween costume. This year she was dressing up as a schoolgirl zombie with her best friend Anna. Lucy turned to look at her bright purple alarm clock on the desk next to her bed. It was midnight Lucy knew her mum would be up any minute to shout at her for being up to late on a school night!

  “Lucy you should have been asleep hours ago” yelled Lucy’s mum.

  “Ok no need to shout!” said Lucy in a cheeky voice.

  Lucy grabbed her Halloween costume and threw it in her purple wardrobe and dived onto her purple king sized bed. Lucy turned and tossed all night dreaming about the horror movie she had watched with Anna last week.

  “Lucy hurry up you’re going to be late for school again!” whispered mum trying not to wake up Lucy’s younger brother Jack. Lucy slowly rolled out of bed and landed face first on her wooden floor.

  “Why are you lying on the floor you should be getting ready for school lazy bones” whispered mum.

  Lucy quickly got up and put her school uniform on. Lucy rushed down stairs trying to put her hair up and put her make up on at the same time. DING DONG! “That will be Anna” shouted mum. Lucy quickly shoved a spoonful of coco pops in her mouth, grabbed her school bag and rushed off to school with Anna.

  Lucy finally arrived at school after walking for half an hour then having to walk all the way home to get her homework when Lucy walked in the tall black gates and saw all the Halloween decorations she remembered it was Halloween!

  “Anna it’s Halloween today!” said Lucy.

  “No kidding!?” said Anna in a sarcastic voice.

  Today Lucy had art, a maths test, a history presentation and music with her favourite teacher Mrs Apple, and before Lucy knew it, it was the end of the day. Lucy was walking home when she got the instinct feeling someone was following her. Lucy quickly turned around but whoever was following her had disappeared. Lucy ran back home hoping that whoever was following her didn’t know where she lived. Lucy quickly ran up to her bedroom and grabbed her Halloween outfit and laid it gently on the bed trying not to rip it. Lucy slowly put her outfit on then put the fake blood on that she bought at Tesco’s yesterday morning. Lucy rushed downstairs to show her mum her amazing creations.

  “Mum look” shouted Lucy

  “You look like a real zombie!” gasped her mum in shock. “DING DONG” Lucy rushed to the door to see what Anna was wearing.

  “Wow you look great Anna!” exclaimed Lucy. “You too Lucy” said Anna. “Hey Anna there is this abandoned house and everyone says it’s haunted. We should definitely go!” said Lucy in an excited voice.

  “Come on then!” said Anna. Lucy and Anna took a shortcut through the woods to get to the haunted house. Lucy got a feeling someone was following her again.

  “Anna I think someone’s following us!” whispered Lucy. Anna grabbed her mobile out of her ripped pocket but there was no signal.

  “Look Anna! There’s the haunted house!”

  They ran to the house and blocked the door with a nearby chair. Lucy flicked a switch and all the lights came on, the house was beautiful there were diamond chandeliers and gold doors. Lucy turned around to look at Anna but she had disappeared.

  “Anna! Where are you? Come back!” whispered Lucy. Lucy moved the chair reached for the door the door handle but it was locked.

  “Anna it’s not funny anymore! Let me out!” screamed Lucy trying not to cry. “BANG!” the lights went out.

  “AAAHHHH!” screamed Lucy. The lights came back on but Lucy and Anna were nowhere to be seen!!!!!!

  The Egyptian Prince

  Stuart Burns

  “It’s finally finished!”

  The evening sun shone over the golden yellow desert sands. Daar, an 11 year old Egyptian prince with sandy coloured hair and sky blue eyes, stood at the base of the pyramid.

  “It’s time to come in “said Daar’s father, the pharaoh, putting a hand on his shoulder.

  Daar didn’t notice his father because he was dazed at the amazing sight of the huge pyramid, where the pharaoh of the land would be buried when the time came. Hours later, when it was dark and cold, he went inside the highly valuable family
palace, which was built out of solid gold 2000 years before by his ancient ancestors. After his filling meal he went to bed.

  When he awakened he waited a while before going to wake his father but this time something was different. This time his father had died

  “Help…Help…HEEEELLLPPP!!!”

  After his call of distress, Daar started crying. The butler of the palace heard him and hurried to the pharaoh’s chamber. He noticed Daar and tried to comfort him while he was crying. “Father…he’s dead…”sobbed Daar.

  Days later, Daar was in his chamber thinking about the family treasure. He was supposed to carry the golden mask everywhere he went (because he performed in the theatre) and it was missing. The butler made the mistake of burying it with the pharaoh and now he had to get it.

  Daar was getting ready for fetching the mask from the pyramid while he was eating his daily loaf of lemon bread, which was his favourite. Later on he went to the foot of the pyramid and lit his torch. He was glad he had lit his torch because the pyramid was gloomy and had a spooky atmosphere. He made his way through the pyramid. Surprisingly there weren’t any traps along the way. Hours later a huge room emerged from the darkness. He discovered that his father’s sarcophagus was in that room with a chest. He slowly approached the chest because there were bound to be traps in this oversized room. He opened the chest – and TA-DA!- there was the mask.

  RUUUMMMBBLE!! Daar turned round quickly “AAAAH!” a massive boulder came rushing towards him! He sprinted out of the pyramid like he was running at 100 miles per hour. After hours of exhausting running, the boulder smashed into many large pieces. Only then Daar found out that it was made of treasure.

  Now he was sitting on the throne with a crown on his head…

  Mrs Screech and Her Class

  Emma Clark

  It was a new term and a new class for Mrs Screech. Mrs Screech’s was a difficult class to handle but Mrs Screech was not a nice teacher either. They played tricks on their friends and on Mrs Screech. Mrs Screech got so annoyed with all the pranks such as flour on the door, throwing water balloons and having a pet day without even telling Mrs Screech. Mrs Screech was so annoyed that she slammed her hand down on the desk with a bright red face and steam coming out of her ears.

  She had, had enough she said “Who did all these tricks?!”

  A girl called Mandy raised her hand and said “It was Jack, Lilly, Jacob, Cameron and Lucy. Why are you doing this to Mrs Screech? The woman’s tearing her hair out.”

  “You will stay in at lunch and have a red card too!” said Mrs Screech. So Jack, Lilly, Jacob, Cameron and Lucy marched down to the head teacher, Miss Beany.

  Jack, Lilly, Jacob, Cameron and Lucy came back and told Mrs Screech all the bad news for them. They had to sweep and clean the chairs and tables after lunch time and have to stay in at all breaks in till their punishment was over.

  “Ok” said Mrs Screech. The kids gasped. “What?” asked Mrs Screech.

  “We, we thought you would shout at us?”

  “Well, we can put it behind us anyway” said Mrs Screech.

  So the weeks went by and Jack, Lilly, Jacob, Cameron and Lucy took their punishment. They got back to class and Mrs Screech said “Sit down, I need to talk to you,” she began “it’s time for me to retire.”

  “You will be getting a new teacher called Mrs Wart, this is my last day” said Mrs Screech. “But we were just getting along!” cried Mandy “Please stay!”

  “Sorry but I have to go” said Mrs Screech. “Anyway, let’s get back to our maths.”

  It was the end of the day the kids said there good byes to Mrs Screech. They found their parents and went home.

  The next day the kids were in the playground wondering what Mrs Wart would look like. Maybe she would have a massive wart on her face and be mean and horrible.

  “Well we will see” said Cameron “Let’s line up, the bell is just about to go.”

  They walked into the classroom, there was Mrs Wart. She was kind, helpful and pretty some of the boys had dreamy eyes towards her.

  “Come on class, quick quick! It’s time to take register” so she called out all the names, only Jack was missing.

  Two minutes later Jack came running in “Mrs Wart I’m here!”

  Mrs Wart was turning blue “How dare you come in my class late! Your mum will be getting a phone call later! Anyway, let’s get back to our spelling!”

  The kids were speechless “Oh no its happing again” said Jack.

  “OK sit down” said Mrs Wart. The bell rang for break they all ran out screaming “shhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” shouted Mrs Wart she sat down and said to herself” this class is going to be hard to handle!”

  Mission Russia

  Ryan Gibson

  “You thought you could breach our sub so it’s either you or your friend! Grrrr” bang bu bang bang.

  6 Hours Earlier

  “Wait” I screamed “There’s a tripwire if you trigger it this whole place will explode!”

  “Thanks” said Sgt.Gibson

  “Where to?” I asked

  “I’ll go check if the coast is clear when I give the signal you come find me.”

  “Yes sir” I replied.

  I wandered around the old dusty and cold submarine trying to find any piece of evidence he could find he was not successful whoever was behind this horrible scam did not want anything to be found. I waited at least an hour he was getting worried about Sgt.Gibson as he cautiously walked to the door he heard a gunshot noise.

  After a few minutes the door opened slowly my heart pounded like a big hallow drum boom, boom boom aagghh his heart was pounding like it had never pounded before and then his heart rate fell. Sgt.Gibson was on the ground he was either dead or knocked out Private Ryan fainted with shock he crashed to the ground.

  “He is vaking up!” exclaimed a Russian leader, after a few minutes my eyes started to become clear when his eyes were clear he could see a silhouette of a man holding a gun he started to get scared and then he heard a mysterious man say “Don’t vorry I have been vating for this for a long time”

  After the conversation of the two leaders of the Russian about invasion towards the world and humanity, he realised he was in chains lying in what he thought was an enemy base. He moved his head left to right in horror that were he was looked like a small sewer he took another look around and he saw six people in the room.

  The Russian leaders came in again they were talking about something I couldn’t quit make out what they were saying but then one stepped back with shock the other brought out a gun and shot him and then shot four people except me and Sgt.Gibson, then the Russian leader pointed the gun at Sgt.Gibson’s head and then Sgt.Gibson broke out of his chains with a furious rage and, considering his hands were at either side of him, he smacked the Russian leader with his wrists and then the Russian leader was stunned, and then he shot him with his own gun, and then he got me out of my chains and then we sprinted down stairs. As we did so he told me the plan he said we had to just sprint to the helicopter and then….

  PARALLEL

  Mark Ingram

  March 24th 2012

  Today I saved the alien race, I met an alien today, I made friends with them as well, I’ll tell you some more about it.

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  I was in my bedroom when my mum was out with her friends and my dad was out fighting in Afghanistan. I was on my own watching TV, nobody home but me. My gran was going to look after me but she got taken to hospital after a stroke she had. She used to tell me stories about a boy who got mysteriously taken into space and meets an alien and a bad guy who tried to get rid of the aliens. I used to believe in these stories but now I just think it was something that she used to tell me to get me to sleep at night. I heard a little buzzing noise behind the TV. I looked behind it and saw some kind of red lightning looking shape. I took all the plugs out as quickly as I could.

  Finally all the
plugs were out and I sat down on my bed, but I didn’t realise that the bed had disappeared and I was now in a swirling tornado going round and round until I landed on the hard ground with a great thud. As I looked around I realised I wasn’t on Earth anymore……

  I looked around and all there was rocks and boulders all clumped together in the middle of nowhere. I walked across the rocks and then I saw something and screamed and then it screamed at me, I hid behind some rocks not daring to emerge from them. The thing came round the rock nervously and mumbled “Who are you?”

  I didn’t know what to say, I just saw an alien, I then managed to say “How do you know my language?”

  It then said “I know it from your world wide web.” The alien asked “Are there more coming?”

  “More coming of what?” I asked.

  “Of your people.”

  “No, well I don’t know”, “Have people come before me?”

  “Yes” it replied.

  “What was his name?”

  “David Moraf. He turned mad last” said the alien.

  “Come with me, I will show you. My name is Quavis, by the way.”

  I followed him back into a big building and millions of aliens were rushing around saying “He’s escaped he’s escaped!”

  “Who’s escaped?” asked Quavis to another alien

  “Him, Moraf, He’s escaped!” the alien shouted.

  All of the aliens stopped at a giant bang coming from outside. They all walked outside and saw another human walking to the big building. He wore a big space suit with the markings NASA on it.

  “He’s heading to the bomb” the aliens shouted.

  He had a gun in his hand. He was going to commit suicide to kill the aliens. I had to stop him, I snuck round the back of him and jumped on his back, he kept on going towards bomb. He was right on top of the bomb, I pressed a button on his space suit and he collapsed into a deep sleep.

  It was a cold dark night and Craig looked at the calendar…..

  The year 5 Billion

  The Boy, the Dark and the Ghost

  Jason Jarvis

  John age 8 and his family have just moved into a new house. Their dad got a new job as a bank man and he is getting paid more so they wanted to move house. It was an old house with old furniture and locked rooms with keep out on it but it was really big and that’s what got their attention. His mum picked him up from school and took him home in her new cherry red fancy car.

  When they got home his mum asked him to get up stairs and get changed into something cosy because they were going to watch a movie.

  So John went upstairs and was getting changed until suddenly he heard a noise the floor was creaking. He thought that’s weird but he kept on getting changed. Then he heard another noise and saw shadows and door handles from locked doors that had keep out on them moving. He was really scared by now. He ran his fastest downstairs to his mum and dad and shouted someone is upstairs! Then his mum and dad went up the stairs wrecking through all the drawers thinking where is this noise coming from? They shouted down to John

  “You are making it up!!!”

  There was no reply, so they went down and…………..

  It was pitch black and they couldn’t see anything they were shocked it was black downstairs but light upstairs!!!!

  All they could hear was banging, scratching on the walls and things getting smashed on the floor, and then suddenly a face appeared and faded away again. They could hear screaming saying ‘’I’m going to get you in a really scary voice’ ’then it stopped SILENCE!!!!! Then a loud scream from John saying

  ‘’MUMMY!!!!!! DADDY’’!!!!

  Then the power went on……..

  JOHN WAS GONE……!!!!!!!!!!

  Henry’s Big Adventure

  Siobhan Kelley

  “Now where’s that blanket?....FOUND IT! Come on in the suitcase”.

  Henry is a small hedgehog who is packing to go on an adventure.

  “Off, off, off I go off I go an adventure!” Henry sang to himself as he packed.

  As Henry was walking he came across a tunnel so he decided to go through it because as he says “An adventure is for exploring!” When Henry was in the tunnel it seemed to go on and on so he thought ‘well I have been walking for a bit....’ So he opened his suitcase, got out his blanket and fell asleep.

  He woke up nice and early put his blanket back in his suitcase and got out some yummy grass root and insect sandwiches he packed for himself. As he set of again the end of the tunnel was closer than he thought, but as Henry was coming out of the tunnel he noticed he was at a duck pond and that’s not good because Henry was scared of water.

  When Henry was out the tunnel he was really scared he didn’t know what to do….after a while Henry decided to sit down so he put down his suitcase and started to cry.

  Henry was kicking the stones around that were at his feet. Then all he heard was…

  “HI! I’m Hoppy!”

  Henry got so scared that he fell off his suitcase! Henry pulled himself to stand up and brushed the stones of him then stared at Hoppy.

  “AND WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!” Henry shouted at the top of his voice.

  “Well, I thought you looked sad, so I thought I would cheer you up!”

  “Well knocking me over sure cheers me up!!” Henry replied.

  “So why are you here? You’ve never been here before”.

  “Well, I came on an adventure and I went through a tunnel and ended up here” replied Henry.

  “So you’re lost.”

  “NO. I can assure you am not lost” replied Henry and stormed off.

  A few minutes later Henry was back and said to Hoppy “Okay, I am lost. What way is it to Simpson Park?”

  “Why don’t I take you?” asked Hoppy

  “I will be fine, thank you!” said Henry as he stormed of for the second time. But hoppy knew that he wouldn’t want to go alone, so Hoppy climbed into Henry’s suitcase because he left it behind. When Henry realised his suitcase was gone he went back for it.

  Henry was walking for about another 2 hours till he started to get hungry, so he sat under a bench and opened his case. Just as he opened it he started to see green. He thought to himself ‘I don’t have a green blanket’ As it was fully opened, the green thing turned out to be Hoppy, and Henry was NOT happy!

  Henry was too tired to deal with Hoppy right then, so he told Hoppy to get some rest. They both went under the bench and fell asleep.

  When they woke up Henry asked Hoppy to join him because he thought it would be good company. On the way back to Simpson Park Henry started to take a liking to Hoppy, and Henry asked if they could be friends.

  But Hoppy didn’t understand, he had never had a friend before, so Hoppy was confused!

  The Boy Who Came Back Too Late!

  Jake Langford

  There once was a boy called Stewie. One day he woke up slowly from a wonderful dream feeling nicely refreshed when he heard a loud bang at the door BANG so he got up and got dressed and answered the door

  “OH” said Stewie in surprise “Hi Kyle”

  “Hi” replied Kyle. “You coming out?”

  “Sure I’ll just get some money first ok? Muuuuum! Can I get some money please?”

  She shouted “Not after stink bombing YOUR teacher’s house” HA A CLASSIC so he went upstairs to his room he thought to himself ‘ ha yes that’s it I’ll run away!’ He packed: money, clothes, a blanket, food then he scoots away to the bus stop and he gets on a bus to Musselburgh. He lived in Stirling so it took him one hour to arrive to Musselburgh

  One hour later he arrived at the wonderful Musselburgh. “Yeah! I made it”screamed Stewie, lashing out with excitement.

  Stewie decided to go in for an old friend of his that he just remembered about. His name is Jake so Stewie wondered off to Jake’s house. He rang the doorbell and instead of the bell going DING DONG it said “Get out of here!”

  Ha! Jake mus
t of changed it. Jake eventually opened the door “Oh hi Stewie, long time no see! Would you like to come in?”

  “yeah, but dude what’s up with the manners?”

  “Oh my mum is paying me £2.50 a week if I keep it up. Anyway why are you here”?

  “I ran away”

  “Well you can stay here for as long as you want ok” said Jake generously. “You can sleep in my room on the other bed below my bed I’ve got bunks now. Thanks a lot for coming coz if you didn’t I would be having brussel sprouts & fish liver for diner”

  “Wow you’re mum must really hate you! ha only joking. I might return back to my house in a couple of weeks so yeah, I’ll stay for a while. Ooh this is goanna be FUN! Hey, your Xbox still work?”

  “Yeah and I’ve got live to & MW3”

  “SWEET”!

  Four weeks later Stewie goes back to his house, but his Mum & Dad were not there. They had moved, so he went back to stay with Jake.

  Mission: Z3R0

  Cameron Lusty

  “5 MINUTES TILL LANDING…

  1 MINUTE TILL LANDING

  10…9…8…7…6…5…4…3…2…1.”

  Wait just a minute I haven’t told you why we were on this mission. Well it’s 2516 and Earth has been polluted so badly it’s dangerous to live there, so the best of the best soldiers have been told to conquer a planet!!! I know what you are thinking ‘conquer a planet!” So now you know why we were on the mission let’s go.”…0 opening doors now.”

  “CHARGE!!!!!!!”

  “Hey where is everyone?” one of my colleagues asked.

  “I don’t know but there are Space Pirates (Space Pirates are the EVIL bandits of the universe) somewhere near. Split up, each group take a radio set, if something comes up radio the others.” Two hours of walking later. “This is hopeless,” I thought to myself when suddenly “ATTACK!!!”

  We had been ambushed by the cunning Space Pirates I acted quickly and radioed the others. “Fight back until reinforcements arrive!” I ordered my team. A few hours of fierce fighting later the reinforcements arrived.

  “Where have you been?” I shouted

  “Sorry somebody had the map upside down,” he said whilst looking at our newest comrade in arms, Ben.

  “Well what are you waiting for?” I shouted “Help us fight!” A couple of hours later we had won but it hadn’t been easy we lost many men many more were injured and the rest were exhausted. When we got back there was a BIG welcoming ceremony in Edinburgh. A year later everyone was settled into their new home on Eliga.

  ‘My name is Harry Black and I am a Space Commando, this is what I do.’

  I know what you are thinking ‘wow Mr Black you’re AWEMENSE! Can you tell us about another mission?’ Well this is what I say to that: YEAH!!

  So there I was on Mars, yes MARS, we had just landed and I felt spacesick. But I KNEW I couldn’t let it worry me or the mission would be a FAIL (and we all know that’s a no- no.) So I gulped in air in through my nose and out through my mouth (like mother told me.) I felt better thinking about me ma.

  Right, so let us get back to the story: we were attacking mars as the martians were threatening to blow up Eliga. As we did on Eliga, we split up into groups I took Ben this time as Space Captain Steve was still annoyed about last time. Once we were in our groups we set off. I took lead of our group. All was well until our scout came running up to me telling me that there were Martians ahead. I asked how many there were. He said 30, so I set the team up for an ambush. Slowly the Martians arrived joking with each other, not realising what was just around the corner. ‘Wait for it…’ I thought to myself……

  Attack!!!!!!!

  Bring-bring! Sorry kids, I’ll have to tell you the story tomorrow, because it’s time up!

  Power Cut!

  Hannah MacDonald

  It was a normal Friday afternoon and Lucy and Erin doddled to Lucy’s house, even though Lucy’s parents were on a boring work’s day out and they wouldn’t be back till late at night. Erin was still aloud to come to Lucy’s house because they were old enough now to look after themselves.

  Lucy and Erin ran quickly up the stairs to get changed because they were going outside to play with their friends. Because Lucy’s parents weren’t going to be in when they got back, Lucy had to take a key with her. Lucy was really worried in case she lost her key. If she lost her key she would be in very big trouble when her parents got back.

  So they both went out to play with their friends, with Lucy being OVER PROTECTIVE, over her key. Erin was Lucy’s BFF, Lucy only has 2-4 friends. It was about 6:00pm and it was getting dark and cold. So Lucy whispered to Erin

  “Can we go home now please? It’s getting dark and I am freezing!”

  “Okay! 1 second! I will tell the other girls that we are going home now” replied Erin.

  The other girls said that they were going home now too.

  So they both ran home. When they got home they were out of breath, they could hardly talk that they were that out of breath! They walked into the kitchen and Lucy poured them both a cup of freezing cold water.

  ‘Oh!’ thought Lucy, “I’ve forgotten to lock the door!” So Lucy bolted to the door, took the key out of her pocket and shoved the key into the door and pushed the handle up and locked the door!

  “Phew!! I nearly forgot to do that!” Lucy said quite happily

  “Do you want your water?” shouted Erin.

  “Yes please I will be through in a sec!” replied Lucy.

  So Lucy went through to the kitchen and got her cup of water.

  “Can we just relax in till it’s time for me to go?” asked Erin.

  “Yeah of course because I don’t know what else we would do and plus I am really tired” replied Lucy.

  So they both sat down and watched telly. They watched Coronation Street for a wee bit and then they watched Eastenders by the time they had watched both of them it was 8 o’clock. So Lucy said to Erin “I think it’s time for you to go home because it is getting late and we have school tomorrow, so do u want to phone your mum?”

  “Yes please is that okay with you because I have my mobile and I could use that?” replied Erin.

  “No its fine just use my house phone” said Lucy.

  So Lucy handed the phone to Erin. Erin dialled the number a phoned her mum. Her mum said that she would come and get Erin and her mum would be there in 2 minutes or so. They waited two minutes and Erin’s mum turned up.

  “Have you got everything now, because your mums waiting in the car?” Lucy asked Erin.

  “Yeah I am sure I have everything, if I leave anything would you, mind bringing it to school tomorrow” replied Erin.

  “Yeah, of course I came but I think you have everything, so you’ve got your school bag and clothes that’s all you brought I am sure” said Lucy.

  “OH!!!!” Shouted Lucy,

  “Did you just see a black thing or was it just my imagination?”

  “No Lucy I think it was just your imagination, I better get away because my mum has been waiting for five minutes now, bye I will see you tomorrow!”

  “Bye see you tomorrow, take care now bye!” shouted Lucy.

  Lucy thought to herself I will watch telly for 5-10 minutes and then I will go to bed.

  All the electricity went off all the lights. All you heard was Lucy scream and then it was all silent!!