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  *** Editor’s Pick ***

  I Ain’t Saying Goodbye

  Crystal Lee

  Adelaide, SA

  The sun won’t stop shining

  And the waves don’t stop crashing

  Embracing the Earth

  Holding it together

   

  But it don’t hold me

   

  I walk through the sleeping garden

  It rocks my soul to the core

  My feet weave between

  Memories of the young bodies

  Laid here before

   

  But for me, no I ain’t getting any rest

   

  I can still feel your love

  Warming up my soul

  I can still hear your voice

  Echoing like stories untold

   

  But it’s still cold air that passes from my lips

   

  The rain falls so heavy inside

  My heart left a deluge

  And your boots they’re still at my front door

  Soaking up the floods of time

   

  And I’m not moving on, not getting any older

   

  For you left me before our endlessness was over

   

  I ain’t saying goodbye

   

  Crystal says that this poem was written about a person in mourning of a loved one.

  Ed: This is our first ‘Editor’s Pick’ for a poem. We really enjoyed the language – the use of ‘ain’t’, not so much the word itself, but the way it was used. It’s very easy to write sad poems using lots of sad words, but the language in this poem is very strong – almost defiant. We also enjoyed the imagery of the boots at the door soaking up the floods of time, and the concept that someone left a partnership before ‘our endlessness was over’.

   

  Friday 6 July 2012 4 pm

  Keeping In Touch

  Linda Callaghan

  Bullaburra, NSW

  Some family and friends live far away,

  And we can’t keep in touch day by day.

  Our memories are full but we miss their smiles,

  Separated by land for miles and miles.

  There is a red box that stands tall and bright,

  It is faithful to all day and night.

  All kinds of letters are pushed through its slot,

  With greetings, and notes of forget-me-nots.

  So follow the footprints to this beacon of red,

  Keep in touch, say hello, there is much to be said!

   

   

  Saturday 7 July 2012